103 大学指考英文作文佳作2篇
要怎么样的英文作文才能在大学英文指考拿到高分呢？
要拿高分，你的作文必须要：
「文章内容丰富、组织条理分明，文意连贯性佳；文法、句构、用字、拼字大致正确，并符合英文书写体例」
这边帮大家节录两篇103年指考的英文作文佳作
让大家看看什么样的英文作文能在指考拿下高分 
首先我们来看看题目长什么样子：
103年考图表题，内容为美国学生一天作息时间分配。
高分的作文在第一段要能叙述并指出美国学生一天作息时间分配特别之处。
第二段则要开始分析自己 (台湾)的一天作息表与美国学生有何不同；或是可以分析图表中项目对学生的帮助与意义为何，如果不太擅长分析，也可以叙述自己一天的生活经验。
下笔之前记得先做思绪延伸，可能的话，列个大纲，整理一下自己的想法后再下笔，才不会导致文章结构混乱没有重点喔！
103指考 英文作文佳作 (E1)
According to the graph which represents how students in an American high school live their day, the students spend 6.4 hours learning and having some related activities, 1.5 hours working part time jobs, 3.8 hours having their leisure time, 0.8 hours exercising, and 0.2 hours doing religious and voluntary things. What’s special is that they spend only 6.4 hours learning and spend 8.7 hours sleeping, which means that they spend more time on sleeping than learning. In Asian countries, it is never acceptable because Asians think that diligence is the key to success. You need to study more than you sleep. Moreover, they spend 3.8 hours social and leisure time every day, and that is half of the time they spend on learning.
As far as I am concerned, I go to school at eight, and go home at five. At school, we learn for the whole day. After school, I usually go home. At night, I study; I go to bed at eleven. Therefore, the total time I learn and study is thirteen hours, and I only spend one hour watching TV, seven hours sleeping, and no time hanging on Facebook or other social networks. How I have my day is extremely different from the American students. The reason why we are so different is that our thoughts and policies are not similar. What Americans place emphasis on is creativity and whether kids are happy or not. They give students more time to think rather than do unnecessary works. In contrast, Asians thinks that the more time you spend on studying, the more successful you will be in the future, so they make kids stay at school for more than eight hours a day to study and learn, and go to bed later at night. However, not all children are suitable for this kind of lifestyle. For example, some people may have more talent in exercising, nut they don’t have enough time or don’t have any opportunity to find it. Hence, there are a lot of things that we can do to adjust our lifestyle in the future.
大考中心评语：
一、第一段明确而详细地描述表格之内容，并清楚点出图表各项数字比较之后所显现的特质。第二段则清楚说明自己一天生活的安排与图表中美国学生之不同，并暗示亚洲学生的时间安排有改进空间。
二、全文内容充实，条理分明，结构完整，用字精准，文笔流畅。
103指考 英文作文佳作 (E6)
The chart shows how high school students in American spend their day. Averagely, each of them spends 8.7 hours on sleeping, 6.4 hours on their studies, 3.8 hours on social and leisure activities, 1.5 hours on their part-time jobs, 0.8 hour on exercising, 0.2 hour on cultural activities and volunteer work, and 2.6 hours on others things. To my astonishment, it seems that American high school students spend rather little time on their studies, with only one-fourth of their entire day. In addition, they spend almost the same proportion of time on extracurricular activities, such as chatting with friends, working, exercising and many others things they like. On top of that, sleeping takes the most time of their day, with more than eight hours a day, which is definitely impossible for me to do that.
By contrast, my life is exceedingly different. First, I spend more than 12 hours on my studies every day. As a senior who is facing one of the most important exam in my life, curricular work definitely takes most of the time of my day. After having classes for nine hours at school, I have to study for at least 3 more hours at home to review the things I learn that day and even preview the lessons for classes tomorrow. Second, I spend only 6 hours a day. At this point, however, it is impossible to do so. Last but not least, it comes to the 3 hours I spend on my leisure activities. After deducting the time I spend on commuting, taking shower, eating, and all the other trivialities, there is 2 hour left for me to relieve me from all the tiring school work. The two hours are divided into two parts. First, I will spend half an hour doing yoga every day, which always takes away all the stress and makes me feel refreshing after doing it. Then, I will flung myself in the sofa and sprawl, watching some TV series and giving my brain a break. The reason why me and students in America spend the day so differently is cultural differences. They emphasize more on the creative use of leisure time. Therefore, they spend more time on the athletic fields, the music classroom, and so on. In contrast, people in Taiwan put more emphasis on school work, on academic performances and scores, which comes from the concept deeply rooted in our hearts that diploma counts a lot. And that makes all the difference.
大考中心评语：
一、第一段先整体说明表格呈现的内容，然后详列细节并将讯息间的关系作清楚的比较。第二段概列个人与其他学生作息相同处，然后仔细说明个人作息特殊之处，最后简要提出台湾、美国两地差异的成因，作为总结。
二、内容丰富，句型变化多，篇章转折运用佳；词意明确，修辞佳。
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