只有中國才寫材料？

工整對仗、合轍押韻是中國寫材料的專利？

是時候祭出乾貨君私藏已久的奇文了——《英國女王登基60周年慶典時英國下議院議長的演講》。

來，大家首先一起感受這純正的英倫排比風：

Sixty years of stability.

Sixty years of security.Sixty years of certainty.

Sixty years of sacrifice.

Sixty years of service.

只要默念一遍，我相信你一定能深深感受到，這麼一小段文字是多麼押韻、多麼工整、多麼對仗！

再來賞析一段：

Sixty years ago, rationing meant rather more than a short wait before the arrival of the latest electronic item. Sixty years ago, Britain had just emerged from a war of an intensity never seen before or since and had slipped into the shadow of the Korean conflict. Sixty years ago, a new 「Elizabethan Era」 was awaited with enthusiasm tinged with uncertainty about the challenges ahead for the country.

三個「Sixty years ago」組成的排比，誰說就Chinese會寫排比了？

還有這一段：

how they live, how they look or how they love

live、look、love三個單詞，都以"l"開頭，別告訴我這是巧合。

看到沒？人家歪果仁寫起材料來照樣一套一套的。咱們要更加努力才行，可不能讓歪果仁小瞧了！

附視頻和演講全文：

v.qq.com/x/page/q1305z7

英文好的請看下面的演講全文。工整對仗的地方，乾貨君都標註出來了，自己感受一下：

Address to HM The Queen

Westminster Hall

Tuesday 20 March 2012

Most Gracious Sovereign,

We Your faithful Commons are honoured to be here to commemorate and celebrate the sixty years of Your reign. We too are pleased to have contributed to the Jubilee Window to be revealed shortly and which will mark this occasion permanently. Time is better preserved in this historic place than in fallible human memory.

Time also tells its own story. Sixty years ago, rationing meant rather more than a short wait before the arrival of the latest electronic item. Sixty years ago, Britain had just emerged from a war of an intensity never seen before or since and had slipped into the shadow of the Korean conflict. Sixty years ago, a new 「Elizabethan Era」 was awaited with enthusiasm tinged with uncertainty about the challenges ahead for the country.【乾貨君點評：看看人家這氣勢如虹的排比】

If, as Gandhi asserted, 「the best way to find yourself is to lose yourself in the service of others」, then Your Majesty must have found Yourself countless times over the past six decades. You have dedicated Your life to others. The daily example that You set, mirrored by our courageous armed forces of which You are Commander-in-Chief, is extraordinary. Yet perhaps Your Majesty』s most profound contribution has been to the continuity that has made change manageable.

For transformation is inevitably turbulent. It has been Your singular accomplishment, Your unique capacity, to hold together that which could have been torn asunder. You have moved with the times and allowed the times to move around the rest of society.

This is a different Britain from 1952 but not one detached from then. We are in so many ways a much bigger, brighter and better United Kingdom. This is a land where men and women today are equal under the law and where Your people are respected, regardless of how they live, how they look or how theylove【乾貨君點評：live、look、love，都以"l"開頭，別告訴我是巧合】. This is a nation of many races, faiths and customs, now beginning to be reflected in Parliament. All this progress has occurred during Your reign. You have become, to many of us, a kaleidoscope Queen of a kaleidoscope country in a kaleidoscope Commonwealth.【乾貨君點評：連用三個kaleidoscope，意為「千姿百態」】

This gathering is one of many diverse events across these islands in tribute to You and this great anniversary. Our affection as a nation will rightly embrace the Duke of Edinburgh and other members of Your family. These will be moments striking for the sincerity expressed as much as for the scenery encountered. Sixty years of stability. Sixty years of security. Sixty years of certainty. Sixty years of sacrifice. Sixty years of service.

Gandhi also observed that 「in a gentle way, you can shake the world」. Your Majesty, in a gentle way You have shaken this United Kingdom and the world for six decades. On behalf of all the members of the House of Commons, may I thank You wholeheartedly for all that You have done, are doing and will do for the good of our country.

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