Some people prefer to take small classes in which professor can remember every students name. Other people think it is better to take big classes. Which do you prefer and why?

Nowadays, people pay more attention to improve the education（這道題用education當關鍵詞範圍太大了）. Some people claim that it is better to take small classes than the big class, while others think they prefer to take classes which have more students. In my opinion, I agree with the former one, because the small class is can make（語言囉嗦，in smaller classes, ） students have more sense of involvement and better learning efficiency.

It may be true that taking big classes may have some merits. Big class can provide for student (provide sb with) more chances to meet more students so that they can expand their social circle. Last summer, I took a Chinese history course which has 50 students in the class last semester.（語言囉嗦，with 50 other students where） I made a lot friends who came from different departments. However, students in the big class have less chance to interact with teachers（這裡的轉折有點突兀，你可以用一個讓步句 although there are more chances to communicate with students, fewer chances left for interaction between teachers and students）, so their problems may couldnt be solved immediately. Accordingly, big class is not the best choice.（這種比較武斷地claim一定要加限定條件，比如 in terms of studying efficiency）

（插入First，）Students in the small class have more sense of involvement. First,（刪除） the attendance in the in the small class usually high because students know they will be missed（被想念？） if they are absent. In addition, every student has a chance to ask personal questions in the class because teachers can communicate more with their students. Also, student have more opportunities to take part in the group discussion so that they may feel like they belong to the group. Whats more, assignments and homework are more likely to be completed because the teacher is more likely to check.（這個理由應該跟這個分論點關係不大） In a word, students in the small class can gain more sense of involvement.（小結句不能僅僅重複分論點句）

Taking （插入不定冠詞a） small class is conductive（conducive） to student』s（a student』s） learning outcomes. In the small class, teachers can remember each students name, they can also know students learning ability and personality. Based on that, the teachers can adjust their teaching strategy to maximize the students learning outcomes. For example, I once took a math course last year. There were only 15 students in the class and most of them were humanities major who didnt have solid mathematic（mathematics） foundations. At first, the professor taught knowledge in（at） a fast speed, causing a lot of students in the class could not keep up with his pace. When students gave their feedbacks, the professor adjusted his teaching method to a more understandable way. In the end, all students in the course passed the final exam with good score. It is obvious that （插入a） small class is conductive（conducive） to students to understand （插入 the）knowledge and have better learning outcomes.

Despite the fact that taking big class have some advantages, I still think taking small class is the better choice for students.

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