謝邀~

自己備考的時候總結的一些句子和句型,可以參考一下。


看過Olivia的回復以後,我想我已經不需要具體地回答你的問題了。

我只為你做一樣補充。

這裡有一個雅思大作文主體段當中的小分點:

Having a year of working or traveling between graduation of high school and enrollment of university allows young adults to gain a range of fundamental skills for living.

我們要拓展它,下面有兩種拓展方式。

方式一

Having a year of working or traveling between graduation of high school and enrollment of university allows young adults to gain a range of fundamental skills for living. Youngsters at this stage will need to take care of themselves regardless of which way they select for this particular year. Earning a bit for living cost happens to be necessary along their journeys and annual working plan.

方式二

It seems to be understandable while looking at the case of Bill Clinton, a previous president of the United States. He used to work in a tiny soap factory when he graduated from high school. According to his bibliography, early recognitions upon the legal rights of the labor force and the relationship between the production process and current flow were formed in his mind during the three short months. Society always teaches newly grown adults its fundamental rules of living and the hidden rule of progression.

你更喜歡哪一種呢?

這裡沒用到任何重要的句型,你覺得讀著還好嗎?

重要的不是句型,而是怎樣把話說的明白又動人。


如下圖,直接總結所有我看過的考官範文,挑選幾個喜歡的,百用不膩:


很多,懶得打,自己找我要吧


不用清邏輯,詞句堆砌 ?再好也沒有用


存在電腦里了,要不你私聊我?


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